Jack was in the jungle with some of his hunter friends. They were on a hunt but this time, it was different. The nerby King had ask them to claim a cave gorrilla for him. They searched for hours but they found some in a far off cave. It was extremly hard, but they manage to captured the beast. But the challenges kept comming, as soon as they were about to leave the cave. A huge animal slamed in frount of the group. The tiger was blocking our escape. It seemed to be the end. Luckly the gorrila saved them.
Eddie you have some grammar issues in your post. Other than that, the post was great and the ending was amazing.
Nice use of words, but you had a few spelling errors. Such as, “gorrilla.” Next time you, you should revise your work.
I like your story, but, front is spelled wrong. Next time, you may want to reread your story.
Great story! Loved the vivid and descriptive details! Keep writing and stay lit!
-Jonathan Pineda